Your contribution to the book is well designed and informs your audience about the history of the coming-of-age tradition, a description of the ceremonies or rituals involved, including the ritual items and symbols used and their significance; however, you were remiss in adding explanation of how this coming-of-age is practiced today.
You have great use of non fiction text features.
You and your partner worked well throughout the research, photo selection, and on your oral presentation.
Daniel Montillla 
Your contribution to the book is well designed and informs your audience about the history of the coming-of-age tradition, a description of the ceremonies or rituals involved, including the ritual items and symbols used and their significance; however, you were remiss in adding explanation of how this coming-of-age is practiced today.
You have great use of non fiction text features.
You and your partner worked well throughout the research, photo selection, and on your oral presentation.